“Mr. Conner! Mr.
Connor!” squeaked a familiar voice.
Con looked away
from the frozen food case – veggie sausage patties? Really? – and smiled at the
sight of Dizzy Miss Lizzy running toward him, her black patent leather shoes smack, smack, smacking the wood floor of
Trader Joe’s. His instinctive pleasure
drained at the sight of the square, sinewy figure following silently in Lizzy’s
wake. Con’s smile straightened into a thin line, his eyes hardened.
He tried though.
He didn’t want Lizzy to think for an instant that his hostile feelings extended
to her. He dredged up a stiff smile and tried to infuse a little warmth into
his, “Hey, Miss Lizzy.”
“Mr. Connor, we’re
having ice cream.” Lizzy reached up a skinny arm – Con winced inwardly at the
site of the sticker-covered cast on the
other – with every expectation of being picked up. But Con could no more have
picked her up than he could have run her over with his grocery cart. He wasn’t
sure he would ever pick up a child again. He went cold just remembering that
contemptuous, What kind of normal grown man chooses
to hang around little kids? with all that it implied.
“That’s great, Lizzy.”
“Up,” Lizzy
prompted.
If Con’s smile got
any tighter, he was going to pull a muscle in his neck.
Wes Callahan now
reached them. He wore faded jeans, a red tee shirt, and an expression as grim as Con’s felt.
“Myers.” His brown
eyes were dark and direct.
“Callahan.” Con
was equally brusque.
“Up,” Lizzy commanded.
Callahan said,
“Angel, Mr. Myers has to buy his groceries.”
His little angel
slipped her hand into Con’s and confided, “I’m not talking to Daddy.”
Me neither. But Con didn’t say it.
Instead he got out, probably with all the warmth of a social robot, “That
doesn’t solve problems.”
Lizzy was
unimpressed. “Michael J. tried to feed one of Miss Pip’s goldfish to Roscoe.”
Con said weakly,
“Uh…”
“Daddy! I like this flavor.” Lizzy darted away to press
her face against the glass door of the case across the aisle. “Daddy, this kind.”
“I guess I’m
forgiven,” Callahan observed wryly. He was looking at Con. He even smiled, sort
of, as he added, “For the moment.”
Con turned, opened
the frozen food case and grabbed the first thing he could reach. Anyone else he
would have asked the usual things. How was Lizzy doing? How was Mr. Callahan
doing? But obviously Lizzy was doing fine, and making polite conversation to
her asshole of a father was beyond Con.
“Look, Myers,”
Callahan began awkwardly.
Con threw a couple
of packets of frozen brown rice in his cart and let the case door swing shut.
He pushed his cart away, but Lizzy came darting back like a little butterfly.
“Mr. Connor, you didn’t
sign my cast.”
“Angel, Mr.
Con—Myers will sign your cast when he comes back to school.”
Con stopped
rolling his cart and threw a disgusted look at Callahan. Wasn’t that typical of
the kind of parent Callahan was? Blithely lying to his kid so he didn’t have to
be bothered with the awkwardness of telling an unhappy truth.
Callahan looked
red and even a little uncomfortable as he met Con’s fierce gaze.
Con said to Lizzy,
“If you’re still wearing a cast the next time I see you, I’ll sign it. Okay?”
Lizzy’s rosebud
mouth turned down. Her dark eyes looked mournful. “But when are you coming back
to school?”
Okay, maybe it
wasn’t all that easy to tell unhappy truths. “We’ll have to see how it works
out,” Con hedged. He gave his cart a nudge, aware that he was trying to sidle
away. There were other shoppers around them now and this was getting more
awkward by the minute.
“What?” Callahan said.
Lizzy began to
cry. That was mostly about her father’s harsh tone of voice rather than
anything Con had said. She couldn’t know what Con was really saying.
“What are you
talking about, Meyers?” Callahan demanded.
Really? In public?
Right there than in the frozen food aisle? In front of Lizzy? Con gave Callahan
another of those scornful looks and determinedly wheeled his cart away. Behind
him he could hear Lizzy making little mooing sounds – but that was okay. That
was her crying-for-attention voice. Her father was quieting her, his deep voice
reassuring but refreshingly brisk. Refreshing, because Dizzy Miss Lizzy had Wes
Callahan neatly twined around her littlest finger. Good. Con hoped she’d run
him ragged when she hit her teens.
But no more
thinking about Lizzy or her homophobic dad. No more worrying about the family
dynamics of his former students. Or the fact that Michael J. had tried to
poison Con’s rabbit – former rabbit -- with sushi. It wasn’t his problem
anymore. It wasn’t his business.
Con wheeled his cart into the shortest line and before
he knew it, he had his bag of groceries and was walking out into the warm dusk.
Awwww, man! But I want this NOW! Any guesses as to release date?
ReplyDeleteApril sometime, that's the plan. Thanks for asking!
DeleteLooking forward to April! Thanks.
ReplyDeleteThis one sounds great! *wriggles happily*
ReplyDeleteThank you, Josh. I'm really looking forward to get to know Con better later this year! :-)
ReplyDeleteThis looks like a really good story. I'm so glad you found it again. Looking forward to April! :D
ReplyDeleteThank you for the excerpt. It look promising.
ReplyDeleteAntonella
It's so strange...when you mentioned finding a forgotten manuscript yesterday, I never imagined it was the above. I remember reading this excerpt months ago on FB and assumed you would eventually finish the story when it fit into your schedule. So happy it wasn't lost forever! :)
ReplyDeletewow. powerful stuff.
ReplyDeleteOkay, I'm hooked! Want it now.
ReplyDeleteMy birthday is in April...just sayin. :-) Happy Birthday to me!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a great teaser, Josh! Thank you for the motivation :)
ReplyDeleteThank you all very much! This was just intended to help the cover artists, but I'm delighted you're liking the sneak peek. :-)
ReplyDeletecan't wait to read it in full. thank you for the teaser.
ReplyDeletei can't wait to read this!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, I keep sneaking in additional words on this while I am supposed to be working on other stuff.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to his very much :)
ReplyDeleteI like this snippet. There's a lot of dialogue, a lively narrating rhythm, but also so much going on between the lines that keeps the reader wondering what Con is going through.
Thanks so much for sharing
Paola
Thank you, Paola!
DeleteI just finished reading Where You Are by J. H. Trumble, which ripped my heart open, and after reading this excerpt I have to wonder if you're about to tear off the scabs!!! Can't wait to see:)
ReplyDeleteWelll, parts of it are sort of funny. ;-P I hope. Maybe.
DeleteI always love your funny bits. And your serious bits. I am just a Lanyon fan, what can I say?
DeleteI just re-watched the awesome Danish film "The a Hunt" last week, looks like this story has some similar plot (just the bit about teacher and young child and misunderstanding), I suppose this is less sinister than the film! I like the excerpt so far :-)
ReplyDeleteUh. "the hunt"
ReplyDelete:-)
DeleteFrom just the title I suspect a similarity in themes. But no, this will not go to dark nor too sinister. That's just not to my taste.
I tried to leave a post on Friday & got rejected...so here goes again...really looking forward to this (as with all the other JL stories)...I've been re-reading A/E & A&D & others and am STOKED for new JL..Thanks!
ReplyDeleteWHAT DID YOU DO TO BLOGGER?! ;-P
DeleteThanks for commenting, rdafan7.
Very interesting!. This fragment has left me craving more. I´ll wait impatiently. Thank you
ReplyDeleteThank you! It's a different story for me -- no mystery whatsoever -- but I'm enjoying it.
DeleteOooh, how you tease! I can't wait!
ReplyDeleteSarah
:-D
DeleteGosh, this sounds so good! It's already doing that old "heart-squeeze" thing to me as soon as it got to the part about how Con couldn't pick up the little girl - You always do that so well ;-)
ReplyDeletePam
Oh, this sounds awesome. Can't wait for its release! :)
ReplyDeleteYAY on the release date! I am really looking forward to reading it!
ReplyDeleteCan't wait! April's nearly here, thank goodness.
ReplyDeleteOh gosh, I'm dying waiting for this to come out! =D I'm checking daily for this story. I hope you put me out of my misery soon. xD
ReplyDelete-Nic
It's in formatting now. It'll be closer to the end of the month because I don't want to step all over my Carina Press release. Thanks for asking!
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